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Simon writes fantasy, SF, mainstream and some stories that can’t make their damned mind up. His work has appeared in numerous magazines. He lives in the UK with Alison and their daughters Eleanor and Rose. He is currently learning to play the electric guitar. Read his writing blog here

Snow Angels
by Simon Kewin



“Oh, look. A snow angel.”

Harriet slid to a stop, holding onto Jane’s arm to stop herself falling over. Someone had lain in the stretch of sparkling snow in front of the Presbyterian Church. Harriet looked up and down the road but could see no one. This late in the year it was already dark. Too icy for cars or many people. House-lights were beginning to twinkle out through the twilight.

“Come on, let’s make our own,” said Jane.

“No,” said Harriet. “Let’s just get home. I’m bloody freezing. And this place is creepy.”

The familiar tone of mischief was clear in Jane’s voice as she replied. “Oh, Harry. We’ve walked past here a thousand times. Like, every day of our lives.”

Harriet shivered as she stood. She could feel the heat being sucked out of her. “Yeah, in the daylight. You know what’s under there, under all that snow.”

“They’re just dead people, Harry. They can’t harm you, can they?”

“Still, I don’t like it. It’s not right.”

“Well, I’m going to make my own angel,” said Jane, unhooking her arm from Harriet’s.

Harriet watched Jane lie down in the thick snow. If there was one thing Jane hated it was being told she shouldn’t do something. She’d always been like that, ever since they were kids. Harriet looked back up the road. They were nearly home. Their parents had insisted they come back from their friend’s together. She could see the lights from her own house up ahead. And, across the field, beyond the stand of black trees, Jane’s too. They were close enough.

“Make one if you want,” said Harriet. “I’m going home.”

She half-walked, half-slid along the treacherous road, shivering as she went. Now that the sun had gone down the temperature was plummeting. Her jaw clenched and her teeth began to chatter. So that actually happened? She’d thought it was just what they said in books. She would never admit that her mother had been right about wearing a coat, of course, but she had been. She stopped and glanced back to see Jane lying in the deep, pristine snow in front of the church, waving her arms and legs up and down to make her angel. Flapping frantically.

Harriet turned away. It was then she must have slipped on a patch of ice. She felt her foot give way, a moment of confusion, then she hit the ground. She tasted gritty snow. Cold bit into her face. Her head throbbed sharply where she must have banged it on the packed ice but she didn’t remember that happening. Had she passed out for a moment? She looked up and around. Everything looked the same – the deserted road, snow everywhere – except that, back by the church, Jane had gone.

“Jane?”

Harriet climbed warily to her feet and began to walk, taking great pains not to slip over again. She touched fingers to her forehead and felt the wetness of blood. OK. This wasn’t funny any more.

“Jane!”

Where was she? Jane wouldn’t have just left her lying there in the road. She must be playing some trick. It was just like her. Harriet followed her line of footprints back to the church. There were her and Jane’s trails, side-by-side. There were no others. No one else had been there and Jane, apparently, hadn’t left. How could that be?

She looked all around, expecting Jane to jump out at her from somewhere. Falling snow began to obscure everything about her. On the ground she could see the outlines of two angels. The newer one was deep, its lines crisp, freshly cut through the white drift. Jane had lain there but now there was just the empty shape of the figure, vaguely human. The falling snow was already beginning to fill it up again.

She could think of only one explanation. Heart pounding, Harriet knelt on the ground next to the snow angel and began to dig with numb hands.

“Jane!”

 She felt her wrists being grasped, felt herself being pulled under the snow, only when it was too late.


END



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